Wednesday, 8 February 2017

Improvements on Double Page Spread of Mock Ups

What I believe I need to improve on from mock up of my double page spread is probably the layout, because all the text seems to be bunched together even though I had a lot of space to work with, also I think I need to improve on my writing skills for the page because the actual story included on the page isn't as good as other professional magazines.

Improvements of Contents Mock Up


Some of the improvemtns that I feel need to made from my mock up of contents page is the layout of the page, because the information about what the magazine include is all squashed together on the right hand side of the page, so in my final version of my contents page I will still be keeping the information in a similar place, however it won't be squashed together like on the mock up, so this will make my magazine look more professional and will make the imnformation clearer to read. Another part of the layout I need to improve on is how images are set out this page, even though I like having my images of my main story and features stories down the left hand side with the white box's, the way I have set them out the mock up needs cahnging, because the idea to do this was from a Kerrang magazine and the way they have done it makes the magazine look professional, but I dont't get that feeling when I look at mine.

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Monday, 16 January 2017

Google mock up of contents page

Google mock up of front cover version 2

After looking at my first version of my Google mock up of my front cover I have decided to make some much needed changes. On my first version I had not used the space wisely as I had left a lot of space on my front cover, so I have filled up this space with extra features such as a footer and I have repositioned things so the space is used up more wisely. Also, there wasn't a visual difference in font type and size so I have changed the font size and the font type as I believe it make look more like a professional magazine.