Improvements of Contents Mock Up

Some of the improvemtns that I feel need to made from my mock up of contents page is the layout of the page, because the information about what the magazine include is all squashed together on the right hand side of the page, so in my final version of my contents page I will still be keeping the information in a similar place, however it won't be squashed together like on the mock up, so this will make my magazine look more professional and will make the imnformation clearer to read. Another part of the layout I need to improve on is how images are set out this page, even though I like having my images of my main story and features stories down the left hand side with the white box's, the way I have set them out the mock up needs cahnging, because the idea to do this was from a Kerrang magazine and the way they have done it makes the magazine look professional, but I dont't get that feeling when I look at mine.